Tip 29 : Avoid jargon
Whatever you do when writing your personal statement, don't hide behind jargon - even if you're certain the reader will understand.
The use of jargon is particularly prevalent in the project/personnel management world, but whatever dubious benefit it serves in the workplace, it does not translate to written applications. Added to this, there are nearly always better ways to word achievements without the use of jargon.
I have, for instance, read personal statements in which the applicant has explained their use of 'Kaizen' (continuous improvement), or 'blue sky thinking'; both of these are useful concepts, but run the risk of being misunderstood when used in an application.
The use of strong, simple language to detail experience and achievements is almost always the best way forward; it avoids misunderstandings, and ensures that you don't appear to be hiding behind technical jargon.
Tip 30 : Remove unnecessary words
If you can remove one or more words from a sentence without changing the meaning, those words don't need to be there. Similarly, if you can think of two or more ways to say something, the shortest, simplest version is almost always the best choice - particularly for personal statements, as there are usually word/character limits to be considered.
Now I know this sounds a very simple and straightforward concept. But you'd be surprised at just how many people overcomplicate sentences, or have trouble saying the same thing in fewer words. Most of the personal statements we're asked for help with are full of long, overcomplicated sentences, which severely undermine the applicant's chances of being successful.